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Making of
THE
LONG
DARK
WAY
by Susan L. Sybenga
(or How to Make a Film with NO Budget and Many Friends)
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| How can I afford to make a film? How can I do it without experience?
I dont know the first thing about writing a script or directing or
anything else for that matter.
So what, neither did I when I started.
Here is what you do. Talk to your friends. Tell them what you want to do.
You may be surprised to find that they have always wanted to try their hand
at filmmaking. One of them may even have a digital camera.
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Find a group or make a group online, for instance at
http://groups.yahoo.com/start
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advertise at your school or college
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talk to everyone about it
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make yourself a t-shirt that says you are making a film.
People will crawl out of the woodwork to be involved. There is a celebrity
wannabe in almost every one of us. I promise, you will have more than enough
people to work with in no time at all.
-Susan Sybenga, blog entry 15th April 2008 |
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Start of the Nightmare
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| Misfit, malcontent and late-bloomer. These are words frequently used
to describe Susan. - Actually these are what I call myself, not what others
call me ! - Susan
She only recently discovered a love of writing. Although her poetry goes
back several decades, she has recently begun writing screenplays and making
short films. |
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In March of 2006, while talking to my mom, Sondra Hauf, over the
phone in Oregon, she told me about a nightmare she had experienced. She is
an avid journaler and having done so, she read it to me. I suggested that
it would make a good short film. She agreed to let me try, typed it up and
emailed it to me. I spent the next couple of days turning her prose into
a screenplay and emailed it back. She fleshed out some of the visuals to
give them more impact and I adjusted the dialog to fit. So, back and forth
it went, for three months, until we had something with which we were happy.
After registering the screenplay with both
The Writers Guild of America
West and
ProtectRite, we
were ready for an outsider's input.
I gave it to some friends whom I trusted to critique it honestly and found
that it was very well received. After making some minor adjustments, I submitted
it to
American
Gem Short Screenplay Competition 2007 and
Script-2-Screen
Film Festival's Shoot-N-OK Screenplay Competition 2006 under the name,
The Nightmare. |
I just want to talk!
In September we found out that it had been nominated, along with two others,
as finalists in the Shoot-N-OK competition. We were invited to do
a live reading at the festival in October which was two weeks away! I sent
out a frantic query seeking actors to read the parts.
The first person on board was Zane Berlin, our villian. He came with
such enthusiasm for the part that I knew immediately that the role was his.
The rest of the cast for the reading was assembled (none of these appear
in the film) and read-throughs and rehearsals were held.
Finally, the day arrived. October 7th. Of course, I was early (a bad habit
sometimes) and bouncing off the walls until all the cast arrived.
As a group, we had decided that rather than sit in chairs and just read the
script, we would perform as much as possible. The room for the reading was
oblong, with doors at both ends of the room. The audience sat between the
two doors. We had rehearsed the evening before in the room, so that we could
time Danny running through the audience and disappearing out
one door and appearing, suddenly, at the other.
When he was outside the room, the audience could hear him yelling
Rachel, come back! I just want to talk. so when he appeared
at the glass door, acting as if it is locked, banging and shaking the door
and shouting, the audience jumps with surprise. It was well received.
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We Won!
On October 8, 2006 was the award ceremony for the festival. Not expecting
the screenplay or the reading to win, I did not dress up. But attended to
cheer for the wins of my friends. Much to my surprise, The Nightmare
won Runner-up in the Shoot-N-OK category (had it won first prize
it would have been filmed and produced by Darkwood Film Company) and first
prize in the Live Screenplay category by popular vote! |
I was shocked! As I walked to the dais to accept, I stopped in the middle
of the stage and called my mother on my cell, much to the delight of the
audience. I told her We won! then held the phone out to
the audience and they enthusiastically cheered so she could hear it. As I
left the stage, ShIronbutterfly Ray told me Don't let runner-up
stop you from making that film. and I took her words to heart.
However, it would be some time before I would start.
In August of 2007, we got the word that The Nightmare had cleared
the first hurdle at American Gem. Out of over 1200 entries we made
the first cut. In September, 2007 we cheered as it made it past the second
round eliminations. We were now in the top 50! This was, sadly, as far as
it went. But we are honored to have made it that far in such a huge competition.
Now it is 2008
People were starting to harass me about when we will make the film. I started
making lists of locations needed and possible acquaintances who might let
us invade their space. Around this time after various script changes we settled
on the new title, The Long Dark Way.
I begin recruiting crew from Oklahoma Movie Makers. This group is
a good place to start. They come together with varying talents and equipment
for the express purpose of aiding in the creation of each member's film without
recompense. Talent and enthusiasm abound in this group of disparate people
from all over Oklahoma, the U.S. and even the world. It was founded in 2004
as a Yahoo Group created by three guys with a dream to make films and became
what it is today, with over 1200 members. From this group came Gregory
Raw, lighting and editing; Brian C. Jackson, sound; Sonja
Jones, actress and Assistant Director; Jake Richardson, cover/poster
art; Erick Wolfe, stunt coordinator; Eddie Monster
Evans, music; and others stepped up to the plate as needed. |
Casting Call
Friday, May 16, 2008 5:00PM to 7PM
Agora Coffeehouse, 51st & Memorial, Tulsa, Oklahoma. Fontana Shopping
Center (inside courtyard east side)
FILM: The Long, Dark Way
Written by Sondra Hauf and Susan Sybenga
Award winning script at Script-2-Screen Film Festival 2006
Genre: Thriller Length: 25+ minutes
Very short SYNOPSIS: A woman is stalked by her daughter's "boyfriend".
Director: Susan L. Sybenga Tall Chick Productions (ASOTI Films)
Parts to be Cast:
Rachel (Leading Role) Late 30's, fit and attractive. This part
requires running and some physical fighting.
Two to Three Friends of Abby (speaking roles) 18 years
Security Guard (non-speaking role, but important) Male, any age
stunts will be involved.
Parts Already Cast:
Danny, the stalker Zane Berlin
Abby, the daughter Kelli Kickham
Gloria, the shopkeeper Patricia Robinson
Shop Customer Sonja Jones
Many Extras will be required for the dance club scene and street scene. |
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I then announced a casting call for the part of Rachel, our
heroine, and arranged a place to have it. Agora Coffeehouse, owned by Jeff
Taylor, was more than happy to let us use the space for nothing.
The day came and only two actresses showed for the part! I was devastated.
Until Renee Michaels walked in the door. Before she opened her mouth
I knew. She is my Rachel. The rest of the cast came together bit by bit and
we were ready to begin.
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 Finding the locations was probably
the most difficult part of the whole adventure. I am not very good and taking
no for an answer. It tends to depress me. But with the help of many of my
friends, but especially Greg Hisaw, we were able to find suitable
places to shoot. Many of these businesses were happy to stay late and with
us while we filmed. My former employer, my chiropractor, Greg Hisaw's housing
association, and an art gallery in Sand Springs, OK for the interior shots
and others for the outdoor scenes. In one case, Sonja, Renee and myself went
to the local mall at the crack of dawn to film the mall scenes. We did not
get permission. We went in commando style, quickly shot the scene and left
before any of the stores were even open.
The second night of shooting, we are filming the scenes outside the bar.
When Zane grabs Renee to get her out of the path of a speeding car, she drops
her purse. Unexpectedly, when the driver guns his engine and speeds off he
annihilates the purse lying in front of his car. This was not intended, but
worked out very well. Sometime later, we are at the far end of the alley
shooting, when a couple walk past on the sidewalk. The man suddenly shouts
Hey, you got a smoke? I just got out of jail. at the top
of his lungs. Although it disrupted filming, it gave us the idea for the
drunk who approaches our actors and Erick W. gamely stepped up to
play the part. |
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day, in particular, stands out in my mind. The 12-hour day shooting the parking
garage and stairwell at the Liberty Tower condominiums! Most of our shoot
days took no more than half that time and I am still humbled by the fact
that none of the cast or crew grumbled about the long hours that day.
I did the SFX makeup for Zane and Richard (the security guard). Zane was
to be shoved down a 5-story stairwell and Richard to be clubbed and then
shot by Zane. What fun! This was my first time doing makeup and apparently
it turned out well. Zane and Greg H. were in the elevator, returning from
a break. A woman got in and couldn't stop staring at Zane, all bloodied and
bruised from head to hip. She kept squinting at his injuries
until Greg explained that we were making a film in the building. She exclaimed,
Really? I was going to say, are you okay? It's so real looking!
And I'm a nurse! Couldn't ask for a better critique. |
At a later date, Greg R., Brian J., and myself returned to get
the sound FX and other shots of Zane falling.
I came up with the idea of taking my child's extra large teddy bear, tying
jeans to his arms and legs and dropping him over the railing, down five stories
to the bottom, repeatedly to get the sound of Zane falling. This teddy bear
sacrificed his nose to the cause.
Greg R. used an action figure tied to fine fishing line to get Zane's shadow
on the wall, falling. |
Hiatus
It took every weekend and some weekdays of June, 2008 to get 80% of the film
in the can and then we took a hiatus to regroup. We did not finish
principle shooting until June of 2009 going back to get pickups, doing
voice-overs, etc. Then began the grueling process of editing, which was bravely
and quickly done by Greg R. After four rough edits, we finally could send
out for the soundtrack. We had the mall music and had the bar scene music
(Imperious Rex). Eddie Monster Evans stepped up and the music
was quickly done.
Finished at last! Of course, this was all timed so we could
enter it in the Script-2-Screen Film Festival 2009 in Tulsa. I wanted to
premiere it where it started, with ShIronbutterfly and Oscar Ray. They have
encouraged me and bolstered my self-esteem for five years (ever since my
first short-short film, Papa's Gone Missing) and I wanted to
share it with them before anyone else.
The film was shown on Saturday, October 3rd, 2009 (along with several others)
to a packed hall. I announced a prize to anyone who could tell me where the
purse, doll and bear (sitting in the lobby) were used in the film. Everyone
could get the purse and the doll, but not one person was able to figure out
the bear. After the films were over, in the lobby, we were very pleased by
the audience reaction.
One person, a filmmaker himself, said: |
| I really was impressed with your short and I wasn't expecting
that! YOU ENGAGED THE AUDIENCE!!! That's always the "key", ALWAYS!!
"Your film, regardless of production value, still "grabbed". Money,
fancy filters, explosions, expensive actors etc.. ANYBODY, can eventually
get if they know the right people.... it's the story/script, ENGAGEMENT that
money can't buy. Plus your work ethic was strong which helps with
overcompensating for lack of budget.
If you have a good script and direct well like you did; get
good actors; have camera movement instead of lock downs etc. I think you'll
emerge (easily) as a front runner in the amateur stage and on to being
marketable. I think if your next short is just as engaging and you beef up
the value, you are DONE with this level and should turn and wave
goodbye! |
High praise, in my book.
I'm already writing the next nightmare called The Dead
Run, a comedy and will again star Renee Michaels.
The same crew is also signed on to the project and raring to go.
- Susan L. Sybenga
"I am also a Producer, Director, Editor and all around jane-of-all-trades.
I also act when the opportunity arises."
In addition to her NAMMA Ten-Best Prize and several other awards for
script and film making,
Susan is specially honored by one other.
At the Script-2-Screen Film Festival 2009, The Long, Dark Way
won the P.A.I.N. Award
for Domestic Violence Prevention Awareness. This was the first award
given in this category. |
The pictures on this page originated, with Susan's kind permission, from
her "Tall Chick Productions"
FaceBook page.
Most of the sidebars come from her blogs about the
production.
Visit her website:
www.tallchickproductions.com
and under the "Film" tab find links to other sites she writes on.
And don't miss her blog which gives almost daily commentary on the shoot
and other projects:
http://tallchickproductions.blogspot.com
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